The sentence reads just fine, if you can give it *attention*. nt - clarkjohnsen

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Topic - John Marks maybe did something right - dpy 20:13:43 03/29/07 (30)

You forgot to mention the free stuff! - John Marks 13:59:24 03/30/07 (15)

OT - What caption won your contest with the female singer looking up in the air? - suits_me 20:10:38 04/17/07 (2)

I declared a 2-way tie - John Marks 11:39:23 04/18/07 (1)

thank you (nt) - suits_me 19:38:28 04/18/07 (0)

I counted 35 words in one sentence! - dpy 14:23:56 03/30/07 (0)

Re: You forgot to mention the free stuff! - Kal Rubinson 14:22:11 03/30/07 (10)

I have never liked that one. nt - Pjay 14:38:12 03/30/07 (9)

Try the ORIGINAL jazz-band version, not GrofÃ©'s orchestration - John Marks 16:11:29 03/30/07 (8)

Just a little clarification... - Tom 20:20:15 04/09/07 (0)

Try the REAL original version - Rob Doorack 07:27:24 03/31/07 (3)

Let's try that again - Rob Doorack 08:07:51 03/31/07 (0)

Re: Try the REAL original version - bjh 07:52:37 03/31/07 (0)

Sorry, the link doesn't work. - John Marks 07:44:53 03/31/07 (0)

Re: Try the ORIGINAL jazz-band version, not GrofÃ©'s orchestration - Kal Rubinson 06:57:55 03/31/07 (2)

Re: Try the ORIGINAL jazz-band version, not GrofÃ©'s orchestration - RonPil 08:29:44 03/31/07 (1)

Re: Try the ORIGINAL jazz-band version, not GrofÃ©'s orchestration - Kal Rubinson 14:59:40 03/31/07 (0)

If you ditched philosophy, what did you find interesting??? nt - TomLarson 12:45:18 03/30/07 (2)

Philosophy is darned interesting - dpy 14:21:03 03/30/07 (1)

Re: Philosophy is darned interesting - TomLarson 17:46:37 03/30/07 (0)

The sentence reads just fine, if you can give it *attention*. nt - clarkjohnsen 08:56:45 03/30/07 (1)

IMHO, it runs on a bit! - dpy 09:28:57 03/30/07 (0)

How's this for "ostentatious"? - Ozzy 08:30:27 03/30/07 (3)

Dude, that was a parody. nt - clarkjohnsen 08:55:09 03/30/07 (2)

Re: Dude, that was a parody. nt - Ozzy 09:20:44 03/30/07 (1)

Yeah, and not worth the trouble. Maybe its a parody of Clark's PF novellas :-) nt - Rick W 09:51:55 03/30/07 (0)

Re: John Marks maybe did something right - theaudiohiffle 07:15:57 03/30/07 (2)

Re: John Marks maybe did something right - acres verde 08:52:37 03/30/07 (1)

No, but we have the same first name :-)..... nt - theaudiohiffle 12:48:40 03/31/07 (0)

Re: John Marks maybe did something right - Pjay 04:59:08 03/30/07 (0)

Whenever I see Marks going on with his democracy foolishness it conjures up the image - bjh 21:44:02 03/29/07 (0)

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The sentence reads just fine, if you can give it *attention*. nt - clarkjohnsen 08:56:45 03/30/07 (1)

IMHO, it runs on a bit! - dpy 09:28:57 03/30/07 (0)