In Reply to: Ok posted by E-Stat on May 24, 2020 at 07:57:03:
You're spot on regarding communication.
Over 40 years in print, advertising and new media has taught me that.
If I was copywriting, I would have said something like "Magnepan is proud to have been selected and now partnered with... yada yada... in a passionate endeavor to... yada yada." Or "Wendell is proud that Magnepan... yada yada... "
Maybe not perfect but these examples took me less than a minute. And the message is transparent.
Will be interesting to see what the magazine ads look like.
Cheers!
Jonesy
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- RE: Ok - Jonesy 09:02:31 05/24/20 (5)
- Rewind to post # 1 - E-Stat 19:26:09 05/24/20 (4)
- RE: Rewind to post # 1 - josh358 15:33:57 05/25/20 (0)
- RE: Rewind to post # 1 - Jonesy 21:11:52 05/24/20 (2)
- Only my interpretation - E-Stat 22:20:07 05/24/20 (1)
- Exactly. Nicely Written! (nt) - Jonesy 05:19:55 05/25/20 (0)