- Posted by andyr (A) on June 24, 2014 at 21:22:01
In Reply to: RE: I'll try one posted by RickeyM on June 24, 2014 at 19:36:26
Rule #1 is that haikus are:
* 17 syllables
* arranged in 3 lines
* so 5 / 7 / 5 syllables.
You have too many in your 3rd line.
There are other conventions but they are not so important.
Andy
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- RE: ;-)) You need to go back to haiku school. ... - RickeyM 07:57:11 06/27/14
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- In Reply to: RE: ;-)) You need to go back to haiku school. ... posted by andyr on June 24, 2014 at 21:22:01
Welcome to Maggies
Take the Red pill or the blue
Happy choices both
To the Maggie noobies, the pill choices represent stock or modded:)
- Excellent!! :-)) nt - andyr 14:14:48 06/27/14
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- In Reply to: RE: ;-)) You need to go back to haiku school. ... posted by RickeyM on June 27, 2014 at 07:57:11
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- Excellent!! :-)) nt - andyr 14:14:48 06/27/14
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